Last week was my final week of my previous two college classes, one of which was Comp & Communications 1 (a.k.a. English 1). For my final essay I got to choose what my topic was about. It had to be a Compare / Contrast Essay, but the instructor let us choose from a list of compare/contrast topics or choose our own. Two music groups was on there so I decided to do an essay that involved one of my current favorite bands, 9 Left Dead. At first I wanted to do something with another one of my favorite bands, but that just was not going to work out. So I decided to include another new band … one I like, but that I do not think is very good live. So I decided to go with 9 Left Dead vs. Rok Hollywood.
While the final essay did not get full points, it only got 1 point deducted from it. I got a 24 out of a possible 25 points on the final essay. Which would translate into a 96% … an A! So I ended up with an A on the final essay and an A as my final grade in English 1. Yay!!!
So I suppose you want to read my final essay …. okay, okay, okay … you’ve twisted my arm …. ha ha ha … here it is:
Nine Left Dead vs. Rok Hollywood
Which one is the superior band, Nine Left Dead or Rok Hollywood? There are five members in Nine Left Dead and only four members in Rok Hollywood. Both bands play rock music and are just starting out. Also, both bands have released their recorded music. While Nine Left Dead has released its debut album, Rok Hollywood only has three tracks that its fans can purchase for download. Anyone can find both artists’ music on Amazon. Both bands also have live videos posted to YouTube. Nine Left Dead is superior to Rok Hollywood because its members communicate better with its fans, Nine Left Dead has an album out, and their live shows sound better.
While there are five guys that make up the band Nine Left Dead, there are only four members that make up the band Rok Hollywood. The members of Nine Left Dead are Travis Jones, the lead singer, Jared Ellis, the bassist, Kreg Anthony, the lead guitarist, Nathan Parrish, the rhythm guitarist, and Bryan Whitley, the drummer. The members of Rok Hollywood are Tony Diekhoff, the lead singer, Duane Conn, the bassist, David Short, the guitarist, and Daren Short, David’s twin brother, the drummer. Daren Short is the only member of Rok Hollywood that communicates with the fans of Rok Hollywood.
While both bands talk with the fans when they meet them face-to-face, Nine Left Dead is superior to Rok Hollywood when it comes to talking with the fans online. Daren Short communicates with fans mainly through Facebook wall posts. He will also post Happy Birthday messages to the fans on their birthday as well as condolence messages to a fan who has lost a loved one. Daren and his twin brother David have lost both of their parents, so they know how it feels to lose a loved one. Although Rok Hollywood does have a twitter account, it is not used to communicate with their fans. Its twitter account is mainly used for announcement purposes. There are two main band members, from Nine Left Dead, who communicate the most with the fans online. Kreg is usually the guy who talks with fans on Twitter, and Travis is the one who communicates on Facebook. Sometimes, Jared will hop on Twitter or Facebook and talk with the fans. The one neat thing about both bands is that Daren will post personal messages (Happy Birthday, condolence, and other various messages) to the fans, and Nine Left Dead will follow and talk to any fans that follow and talk to them on Twitter. While these two bands have different online communication styles, that is not the biggest difference between the two bands.
Another difference between Nine Left Dead and Rok Hollywood is the recorded music. Rok Hollywood does not currently have an album out, but it does have three songs that an interested person can listen to online. If they like what they hear online, they can download the three songs for 89 cents each from Amazon. Nine Left Dead has three songs posted on the band’s facebook page that anyone can listen to. If that person likes what they hear, Nine Left Dead does have an album out, the album is called, “The Wrong Things.” Their album can currently be purchased online from either Amazon or from Best Buy if the actual album is wanted. If having the actual disc and album cover does not matter, then Nine Left Dead’s album can be purchased from iTunes. While this is a difference between the two bands, it still is not the biggest difference between these two bands.
While both bands have recorded music that anyone can purchase, and both bands’ recorded music sounds good, the biggest difference between these two bands is when they are on stage. Both bands have videos of their live performances posted on YouTube. Rok Hollywood’s recorded music sounds good and is easy on the ears. However, when listening to Tony during a live Rok Hollywood performance, it sounds like someone dragging their fingernails down a chalkboard. Their live sound sounds nothing like their recorded music. Rok Hollywood needs to replace their lead singer with somebody else. Tony’s voice is all wrong for Rok Hollywood’s sound. If Rok Hollywood would like an example of what a well-blended band sounds like, they should take notes from Nine Left Dead. When someone listens to a live Nine Left Dead performance, it sounds like what a rock band should sound like live.
In conclusion, Nine Left Dead is superior to Rok Hollywood because they have five members who are all good looking. The only two members from Rok Hollywood that are good looking are the twin brothers, Daren and David Short. When it comes to talking to the fans online, Nine Left Dead is superior to Rok Hollywood. Only one member of Rok Hollywood will talk to the fans online, but at least three members of Nine Left Dead – if not all of the band – will talk to the fans online. While both bands have recorded music that a fan can purchase, Nine Left Dead is better than Rok Hollywood because they have an actual album that can be purchased. Rok Hollywood does not currently have an album out that one can purchase. The only music from Rok Hollywood one can purchase is their three songs, and those are only in mp3 format. While it is possible to purchase an audio version of Nine Left Dead’s album through iTunes, it is also possible to purchase a compact disc version of the album online through Amazon or Best Buy. The biggest way that Nine Left Dead is superior to Rok Hollywood is that Nine Left Dead live performances sound much better than Rok Hollywood. If Rok Hollywood wanted to improve its live sound they should really replace the lead singer with somebody else. Tony’s voice, at least in his live shows, sounds like fingernails dragged across a chalkboard. If these two bands were going to be playing in the same city on the same night, the smart choice would be to go to the Nine Left Dead live performance. Rok Hollywood is best listened to in recorded music only. Nine Left Dead not only rocks out on its album, but also on stage with its live performances.
Well, I really should go do my posts for my two new classes … so, I will catch up with you in the next post I make. I just had to share my A’s in English!